# Need critics pls

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/need-critics-pls/292456>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [July 14, 2009, 12:59pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/need-critics-pls/292456 "2009-07-14T12:59:55Z")\
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**Author:** ![surf](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/77aa72/32.png) [@surf](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/surf)\
**Post date:** [July 14, 2009, 12:59pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/need-critics-pls/292456/1 "2009-07-14T12:59:55Z")

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this used to be the flash site…

[http://humanitystudios.smthakur.com](http://humanitystudios.smthakur.com)

after bein suggested by the forumERS to do in html

i have come up with this

[http://humanitystudios.smthakur.com/test](http://humanitystudios.smthakur.com/test)

please tell me if it needs any more improveemnts  
kind regards  
surf