# Need critique on my first Flash site that I will be showing at a design interview

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**Created:** [May 21, 2007, 1:48am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/need-critique-on-my-first-flash-site-that-i-will-be-showing-at-a-design-interview/226386 "2007-05-21T01:48:45Z")\
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**Post date:** [May 21, 2007, 1:48am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/need-critique-on-my-first-flash-site-that-i-will-be-showing-at-a-design-interview/226386/1 "2007-05-21T01:48:45Z")

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Hey guys,

Over the last 9 months I have been trying to learn Flash and web design (I’m thinking of switching careers).

This Thursday I have a meeting with a manager of a graphic/web design group. I am mostly looking at it as a critique session on what I need to improve on etc but who knows maybe I’ll get a job offer out of it if I impress the guy.

My sole piece that I will be showing is a website I am working on for my wife’s cousin who is a photographer. Its almost done (only the “sessions” part isnt done yet).

[http://stickeredvan.com/clients/MMP/](http://stickeredvan.com/clients/MMP/)

Please let me know what you think. Is it good, bad and what makes it good or bad? What needs improvement, etc?

Thanks guys. I just hope this one piece is enough to show the manager I am seriously working towards switching careers.