# Need critiques on a brochure cover

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/need-critiques-on-a-brochure-cover/225185>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [May 9, 2007, 2:44pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/need-critiques-on-a-brochure-cover/225185 "2007-05-09T14:44:04Z")\
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**Author:** ![shane\_c](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/3be4f8/32.png) [@shane\_c](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/shane_c)\
**Post date:** [May 9, 2007, 2:44pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/need-critiques-on-a-brochure-cover/225185/1 "2007-05-09T14:44:04Z")

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I’m designing a cover for a “Celebrity Series” of dental instruments… Basically, it’s just a series of very high-end instruments designed by nine of the best, most well-known people in their field. It’s supposed to look high-end, classy, and sort of reflect the “celebrity” aspect as well.

![](http://www.am-eagle.com/images/celebrity-series.jpg)

Some quick notes:  
–It’s still in the beginning stages, but this is basically the layout I’m going for  
–The big left portion is the actual cover - the right side is going to be tabs for easy opening each of the doctors’ pages in the brochure. (The right side, I think, needs some help)  
–The photos of the doctors repeat - we’ve only got 4 on hand so far.  
–The “American Eagle” logo & font is pre-existing. However, I can move it around, if need be.  
–The faint “Celebrity Series” at the top in Zapfino type: I’m actually planning on having this just as a glossy varnish. What do you think?

I don’t really have the type of deadline where I can totally start over - but please, don’t hold back! Tell me what you really think!

Thanks!