# Need some Art Critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/need-some-art-critique/149313>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [May 27, 2005, 7:20pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/need-some-art-critique/149313 "2005-05-27T19:20:26Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 1\
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**Author:** ![Xero](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/x/aca169/32.png) [@Xero](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Xero)\
**Post date:** [May 27, 2005, 7:20pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/need-some-art-critique/149313/1 "2005-05-27T19:20:26Z")

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Hello, Mabye some people remember me. I havnt posted in over 2 years lol. Well I just need some art critique on a concept sketch before going in and polishing it up. I am going to delete the astronaut type guy in the corner and add a wizard icasting the metors on this peacful city. Just need some things people would like to see in this painting that I can improve before I take it to the next level.

[![](http://img227.echo.cx/img227/1982/chrisstarklandscape1wv.th.jpg)](http://img227.echo.cx/my.php?image=chrisstarklandscape1wv.jpg)