# New animation ( needs a critique)

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-animation-needs-a-critique/206347>\
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**Created:** [November 7, 2006, 1:25pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-animation-needs-a-critique/206347 "2006-11-07T13:25:47Z")\
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**Author:** ![dravalanche](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/8797f3/32.png) [@dravalanche](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/dravalanche)\
**Post date:** [November 7, 2006, 1:25pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-animation-needs-a-critique/206347/1 "2006-11-07T13:25:47Z")

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im working on this for class, the brief was " make an animation about how gumballs are made" this is mine. It isn’t finished yet but I thought I’d see what ya’ll think so far.  
[http://img487.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gummballfinalrn1.swf](http://img487.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gummballfinalrn1.swf)

thanks