# New Game critique

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-game-critique/150066
**Category:** design
**Created:** [June 3, 2005, 12:09pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-game-critique/150066 "2005-06-03T12:09:56Z")
**Posts on this page:** 1
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### Author: ![e\_sarbak](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/e/eb9ed0/32.png) [@e\_sarbak](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/e_sarbak)
#### Post date: [June 3, 2005, 12:09pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-game-critique/150066/1 "2005-06-03T12:09:56Z")

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I have made a game that needs your constructive critiques,

[http://www.geocities.com/esarbak1989/okx2.swf](http://www.geocities.com/esarbak1989/okx2.swf)