# New intro: need critics

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-need-critics/9127>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [December 5, 2002, 1:44pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-need-critics/9127 "2002-12-05T13:44:16Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 6\
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**Author:** ![naz](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/n/e99b99/32.png) [@naz](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/naz)\
**Post date:** [December 5, 2002, 1:44pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-need-critics/9127/1 "2002-12-05T13:44:16Z")

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hi  
can you give my your opinion about my last intro, i’ve done it for a particular…thanks  
naz  
[http://perso.club-internet.fr/rafik.zemouli/lyes.html](http://perso.club-internet.fr/rafik.zemouli/lyes.html)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 5, 2002, 2:04pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-need-critics/9127/2 "2002-12-05T14:04:18Z")

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very very cool, check my post, i need some help!  
\>\> Kev

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 5, 2002, 7:26pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-need-critics/9127/3 "2002-12-05T19:26:20Z")

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Use a drawn map. The national geographic map you have, gets too pixelated

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 5, 2002, 9:26pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-need-critics/9127/4 "2002-12-05T21:26:53Z")

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nice, wish i knew how to do that.  
I’m learning though.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 5, 2002, 10:27pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-need-critics/9127/5 "2002-12-05T22:27:22Z")

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Really impressive. I agree about the map idea. Other than that, I would probably increase the size of the load bar at the beginning so that the percentage doesn’t hit the black outline. Yes, I’m nit-picking, but that’s because the rest is so cool.

AC

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 6, 2002, 1:33am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-need-critics/9127/6 "2002-12-06T01:33:53Z")

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i’ve changed the map ell me what u think now\*?