# New intro page **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [August 13, 2004, 6:56am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-page/119291 "2004-08-13T06:56:00Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 13\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Eternalistic](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/eternalistic/32/577_2.png) [@Eternalistic](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Eternalistic)\ **Post date:** [August 13, 2004, 6:56am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-page/119291/1 "2004-08-13T06:56:00Z")
I decided to go ahead and begin the first steps in redesigning my web site… Tonight I actually started and finished my intro page in which I plan on basing my design off of for the actual Flash web site. I designed a new logo as well. As of right now I created a basic PORTFOLIO section to show off my previous work while I begin working on the Flash site, which Im sure is going to take me quite a while… Ive learned a lot recently by browsing through Kirupa Forums and by the tutorials posted on here and I felt like it was time to update my web site to reflect my new found knowledge. Any feedback is welcome and encouraged. I need to get ideas flowing so I can get started on the overhaul. You can view my old site here: [http://www.eternalistic.net/index\_backup.html](http://www.eternalistic.net/index_backup.html) -Jeremy ---
**Author:** ![Voetsjoeba](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/v/ac91a4/32.png) [@Voetsjoeba](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Voetsjoeba)\ **Post date:** [August 13, 2004, 7:03am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-page/119291/2 "2004-08-13T07:03:42Z")
Hey Jeremy ! 🙂 Your design looks very nice, but the fonts and the text effects kinda ruin it. Try spicing them up. Framerate is a bit low too - remember that the human brain requires an animation to be at least 24 fps to be smooth. Some transitions and cool effects would really coolen things up too. ---
**Author:** ![bwh2](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/8c91f0/32.png) [@bwh2](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/bwh2)\ **Post date:** [August 13, 2004, 7:10am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-page/119291/3 "2004-08-13T07:10:04Z")
i’d try easing for the menu animation rather than a motion tween. and increase the fps a little as voetsjoeba mentioned. good start though. ---
**Author:** ![Eternalistic](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/eternalistic/32/577_2.png) [@Eternalistic](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Eternalistic)\ **Post date:** [August 13, 2004, 7:17am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-page/119291/4 "2004-08-13T07:17:58Z")
Maybe I shouldnt have included my old design for critique. What I meant to do was have my new design critiqued as compared to my old one. Here is my new intro page: [www.eternalistic.net](http://www.eternalistic.net) And here is what it used to be: [www.eternalistic.net/index\_backup.html](http://www.eternalistic.net/index_backup.html) Im sorry for the confusion. -Jeremy ---
**Author:** ![Voetsjoeba](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/v/ac91a4/32.png) [@Voetsjoeba](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Voetsjoeba)\ **Post date:** [August 13, 2004, 7:21am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-page/119291/5 "2004-08-13T07:21:29Z")
Oh-hoho ! Sorry for that ! Guess I had to read that one last sentence more thoroughly :trout: That splash page sure looks promising :thumb: Some nice sites in your portfolio too ! ---
**Author:** ![bwh2](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/8c91f0/32.png) [@bwh2](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/bwh2)\ **Post date:** [August 13, 2004, 2:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-page/119291/6 "2004-08-13T14:03:04Z")
yeah, didn’t read the fine print either. new splash is looking pretty good. ---
**Author:** ![speed](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/ad7895/32.png) [@speed](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/speed)\ **Post date:** [August 13, 2004, 2:04pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-page/119291/7 "2004-08-13T14:04:54Z")
nice i think your web page looks hot good job ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 13, 2004, 3:16pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-page/119291/8 "2004-08-13T15:16:42Z")
liking that splash…logo is coooool ---
**Author:** ![bodyvisual](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/bodyvisual/32/564_2.png) [@bodyvisual](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/bodyvisual)\ **Post date:** [August 13, 2004, 3:28pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-page/119291/9 "2004-08-13T15:28:19Z")
i like the site all i all (even the splash ;)) but you need to up your fps to 30 on your flash bit… 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![Brandon](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/f08c70/32.png) [@Brandon](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Brandon)\ **Post date:** [August 13, 2004, 10:51pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-page/119291/10 "2004-08-13T22:51:04Z")
it looks good you dont need to change the fps up to 30 that excesive lol ---
**Author:** ![bwh2](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/8c91f0/32.png) [@bwh2](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/bwh2)\ **Post date:** [August 13, 2004, 11:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-page/119291/11 "2004-08-13T23:03:59Z")
> [@Brandon?](#): > > it looks good you dont need to change the fps up to 30 that excesive lol in reference to the old site, i think 30 actually would have been a good #. i always use 30-35. ---
**Author:** ![Eternalistic](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/eternalistic/32/577_2.png) [@Eternalistic](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Eternalistic)\ **Post date:** [August 14, 2004, 1:30am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-page/119291/12 "2004-08-14T01:30:20Z")
Thanks for all the positive responses. They mean a lot to me as I am in need of inspiration and am always looking for ways to improve upon what I have learned. The old design which I posted on here was actually my first Flash web site and I built it in March of 2003. It had gone unchanged besides my portfolio since that time, so it was due time for a new design. Hopefully Ill be able to find the time to actually get started on the new layout soon. Ill be sure to keep you guys posted as I progress. Thanks again. -Jeremy ---
**Author:** ![morse](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/bbce88/32.png) [@morse](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/morse)\ **Post date:** [August 14, 2004, 1:52am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-intro-page/119291/13 "2004-08-14T01:52:54Z")
Well, the new splash certainly looks good. :thumb: