# New site.website critique please..Thanks!

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-site-website-critique-please-thanks/265657>\
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**Created:** [July 11, 2008, 3:01am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-site-website-critique-please-thanks/265657 "2008-07-11T03:01:53Z")\
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**Author:** ![Vanss472](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/v/c77e96/32.png) [@Vanss472](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Vanss472)\
**Post date:** [July 11, 2008, 3:01am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-site-website-critique-please-thanks/265657/1 "2008-07-11T03:01:53Z")

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Hi all,

I’m working on my new website and I would like some feedback.  
So far I have done the home page.  
Please check out the work in progress at: [http://www.busybrain.net/proofing/design/vanSiTe-1.html](http://www.busybrain.net/proofing/design/vanSiTe-1.html)

Mp3 player it is not working properly yet only play track 1.

Thanks  
V :sen:

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**Author:** ![saxx](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/f04885/32.png) [@saxx](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/saxx)\
**Post date:** [July 11, 2008, 4:10am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-site-website-critique-please-thanks/265657/2 "2008-07-11T04:10:37Z")

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I actually like it, i mean its simple fairly neat. But not everything works, its a generic design meaning theres 1000s like it. Its not unique at all. 😃 Love you

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**Author:** ![Vanss472](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/v/c77e96/32.png) [@Vanss472](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Vanss472)\
**Post date:** [July 15, 2008, 3:17pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-site-website-critique-please-thanks/265657/3 "2008-07-15T15:17:54Z")

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> [@saxx;2356655](#):
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> I actually like it, i mean its simple fairly neat. But not everything works, its a generic design meaning theres 1000s like it. Its not unique at all. 😃 Love you

Hi Thanks for the comment.  
Now would you be kind and tell me which one look better:

1. [http://www.busybrain.net/proofing/design/vanSiTe-1.html](http://www.busybrain.net/proofing/design/vanSiTe-1.html)  
or
2. [http://www.busybrain.net/proofing/design/vanSiTe-2.html](http://www.busybrain.net/proofing/design/vanSiTe-2.html)

Thanks,  
V 🔗

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**Author:** ![celandine](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/96bed5/32.png) [@celandine](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/celandine)\
**Post date:** [July 15, 2008, 3:22pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-site-website-critique-please-thanks/265657/4 "2008-07-15T15:22:16Z")

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I like no. 1 better - it’s cleaner and more dynamic…