# New Version Please Critique **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [December 21, 2002, 11:36pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-version-please-critique/9972 "2002-12-21T23:36:25Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 11\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![slayerment](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/a6a055/32.png) [@slayerment](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/slayerment)\ **Post date:** [December 21, 2002, 11:36pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-version-please-critique/9972/1 "2002-12-21T23:36:25Z")
I just finished my latest version of my portfolio site. Any feedback would be great. Thank you. [http://www.quintonfigueroa.com/index3/index.htm](http://www.quintonfigueroa.com/index3/index.htm) you need [flash 6](http://www.macromedia.com/shockwave/download/download.cgi?P1_Prod_Version=ShockwaveFlash&P5_Language=English) to view it ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 22, 2002, 5:25am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-version-please-critique/9972/2 "2002-12-22T05:25:28Z")
I see you improved a lot since your last layout which was 9238470298374238 megs or something hehhe j/k. I like this layout more than the other one even though it did kick \*\*\* as well. I like your transitions, they’re pretty smooth. I was wondering why do you have a line that cuts your layout? I think it would look better without that line and just let your layout flow seemlessly to the right. Great job so far. =) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 22, 2002, 5:52am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-version-please-critique/9972/3 "2002-12-22T05:52:15Z")
thanks for the feedback. i thought about not using the line but decided it looked weird having boxes fly in out of nowhere. the line makes it so stuffs not just cut of i guess. but ya thanks for the feedback 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 22, 2002, 5:59am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-version-please-critique/9972/4 "2002-12-22T05:59:25Z")
I like it. It is good. ■■■■, I wish I could create a Flash site that looked at least semi good… lol. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 22, 2002, 6:01am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-version-please-critique/9972/5 "2002-12-22T06:01:05Z")
> \*Originally posted by lostinbeta \* > \*\*I like it. It is good. Damn, I wish I could create a Flash site that looked at least semi good… lol. \*\* Im curious, why don’t you lost? You difintely have the skill to do it, I don’t see why you wouldnt? ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 22, 2002, 6:04am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-version-please-critique/9972/6 "2002-12-22T06:04:08Z")
I am an :A+: idiot in designing in Flash. I am so horrible at it for some odd reason. I started on a Flash version quite a few times, but scrapped them all because they were so… not good…lol. I am planning on releasing one sooner or later though. For the past few days I have had ideas brewing in my head. I might use them. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 22, 2002, 6:37am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-version-please-critique/9972/7 "2002-12-22T06:37:46Z")
ur like better than all us at flash beta. im sure ud pull of a slick flash site. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 22, 2002, 6:38am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-version-please-critique/9972/8 "2002-12-22T06:38:27Z")
Flash AS I will admit that I am semi good at. Flash design… nah. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 24, 2002, 4:20pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-version-please-critique/9972/9 "2002-12-24T16:20:36Z")
not meant to be negative by any means, but i see lots of stuff that’s been done before. but now that i’ve said that… I LOVE IT! the sounds are ok, but what catches my attention is the colors and the layout. the bevel effects are cool too. the transitions are neat-o and not over done. good work! /unflux \<:} ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 24, 2002, 4:21pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-version-please-critique/9972/10 "2002-12-24T16:21:50Z")
> \*Originally posted by slayerment \* > \*\*ur like better than all us at flash beta. im sure ud pull of a slick flash site. \*\* i agree…lost you really need to get something done in flash! /unflux \<:} ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 24, 2002, 6:07pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/new-version-please-critique/9972/11 "2002-12-24T18:07:38Z")
Well once I finish my HTML version I will get cracking on my Flash Version (again) 🙂