# Newb logo critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/newb-logo-critique/123803>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [September 27, 2004, 2:31pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/newb-logo-critique/123803 "2004-09-27T14:31:46Z")\
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**Author:** ![zacus](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/z/278dde/32.png) [@zacus](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/zacus)\
**Post date:** [September 27, 2004, 2:31pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/newb-logo-critique/123803/1 "2004-09-27T14:31:46Z")

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heya im kinda new to design and i thought if i want to one day make money from designing maybe i should try making a logo

well two minutes l8r here it is;  
 ![](http://www.geocities.com/waqkum/logo1_practise.jpg)

now that i actually look at it im not too sure about it so whatever critique you give will be appreciated and i wont be offended

BTW its meant to be for a salon or somthin

what can i do to better my designs based on this… err… work