# Ocean Travel

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/ocean-travel/186124>\
**Category:** contests\
**Created:** [April 19, 2006, 5:34am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/ocean-travel/186124 "2006-04-19T05:34:08Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 5\
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**Author:** ![freeskier89](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/f/f475e1/32.png) [@freeskier89](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/freeskier89)\
**Post date:** [April 19, 2006, 5:34am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/ocean-travel/186124/1 "2006-04-19T05:34:08Z")

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Hello again,

Here is my second entry and possibly the last. I will modify in the future probably. I am really curious to what you guys think, and I feel free to critique!

My main question is, do you think that there is too much blank space above the puerto madryn text? I kind of like it, because it isn’t cluttered. But I can also see why some would say that it looks too blank.

Thanks a lot!

[![](http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/950/oceantravel4zi.th.jpg)](http://img202.imageshack.us/my.php?image=oceantravel4zi.jpg)

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**Author:** ![SlowRoasted](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/a698b9/32.png) [@SlowRoasted](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SlowRoasted)\
**Post date:** [April 19, 2006, 3:46pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/ocean-travel/186124/2 "2006-04-19T15:46:09Z")

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too much of the travel is cut off by the penguin head. Other than that it looks pretty good.

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**Author:** ![ApixDesigns](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/a88e57/32.png) [@ApixDesigns](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/ApixDesigns)\
**Post date:** [April 24, 2006, 1:05am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/ocean-travel/186124/3 "2006-04-24T01:05:04Z")

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looks arlight, not fond of the text though. but it looks pretty solid

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**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\
**Post date:** [April 24, 2006, 1:49am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/ocean-travel/186124/4 "2006-04-24T01:49:51Z")

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😃 like I mentioned in the PM- try the font I told ya 😛

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**Author:** ![freeskier89](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/f/f475e1/32.png) [@freeskier89](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/freeskier89)\
**Post date:** [April 24, 2006, 4:33am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/ocean-travel/186124/5 "2006-04-24T04:33:30Z")

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Thanks guys! I will definitely change the font in a bit and add some more detail 😃