# One more critique on my logo
**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-critique-on-my-logo/17428
**Category:** design
**Created:** [April 5, 2003, 3:18am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-critique-on-my-logo/17428 "2003-04-05T03:18:55Z")
**Posts on this page:** 11
**Page:** 1
### Author:  [@DDD](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/DDD)
#### Post date: [April 5, 2003, 3:18am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-critique-on-my-logo/17428/1 "2003-04-05T03:18:55Z")
They wanted something with more luster and shine give me your opinions on this one
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [April 5, 2003, 3:20am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-critique-on-my-logo/17428/2 "2003-04-05T03:20:51Z")
or this one one??
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [April 5, 2003, 3:32am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-critique-on-my-logo/17428/3 "2003-04-05T03:32:03Z")
1st
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [April 5, 2003, 3:40am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-critique-on-my-logo/17428/4 "2003-04-05T03:40:42Z")
I’m having a bit of trouble with the reflection in #1… I don’t know what it is tho…
#2 looks real clean…
how about that for a waffle?
Rev 
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [April 5, 2003, 3:50am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-critique-on-my-logo/17428/5 "2003-04-05T03:50:21Z")
I llike the second also the reflection on the first looks better when the logo is n the scene that is causeing the reflection. I may just suck it up and do it in LW7.5 but this i preprod so I just did it in swift 3d.
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [April 5, 2003, 4:30am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-critique-on-my-logo/17428/6 "2003-04-05T04:30:30Z")
2nd one is much better and cleaner IMO.
Both are pretty good tho.
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [April 5, 2003, 1:54pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-critique-on-my-logo/17428/7 "2003-04-05T13:54:16Z")
I like the second one…Just looks smoother.
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [April 5, 2003, 5:38pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-critique-on-my-logo/17428/8 "2003-04-05T17:38:40Z")
The first one is… chunky or something. I dunno.
I like how smooth the second one is. I think you should stick with that.
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [April 5, 2003, 8:02pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-critique-on-my-logo/17428/9 "2003-04-05T20:02:14Z")
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [April 5, 2003, 8:07pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-critique-on-my-logo/17428/10 "2003-04-05T20:07:35Z")
rofl, i love that site, those kids must be losers lol
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [April 5, 2003, 9:46pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-critique-on-my-logo/17428/11 "2003-04-05T21:46:24Z")
yeah it is really really really really really really funny