# One more time **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [November 26, 2002, 3:45am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-time/8664 "2002-11-26T03:45:24Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 12\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Ryall](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/53a042/32.png) [@Ryall](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Ryall)\ **Post date:** [November 26, 2002, 3:45am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-time/8664/1 "2002-11-26T03:45:24Z")
Blah, dont like it too much, but getting better… CCS please! **::edit:: scroll down for newer versions ::edit::** Here it is: see edit:) Peace ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [November 26, 2002, 3:58am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-time/8664/2 "2002-11-26T03:58:47Z")
There is also a version with a bluish butterfly perched in the top right black area… but I like this one better. Peace ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [November 26, 2002, 3:59am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-time/8664/3 "2002-11-26T03:59:16Z")
Much better!!! But that thing in the center doesn’t really fit… you have sloppiness everywhere, then nice clean bright white lines building a train (?) in the middle :-\ ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [November 26, 2002, 4:02am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-time/8664/4 "2002-11-26T04:02:07Z")
Heres this version, I dunno which I like better… ![](http://www.grafikdesigns.com/photoshop7/grungeTrainCar2.jpg) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [November 26, 2002, 4:04am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-time/8664/5 "2002-11-26T04:04:20Z")
I kinda liked the contrast of the mess and the lines… here is is without any lines: ![](http://www.grafikdesigns.com/photoshop7/grungeTrainCar3.jpg) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [November 26, 2002, 4:06am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-time/8664/6 "2002-11-26T04:06:13Z")
I like the last one the best. The one without the lines. I think i is great 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [November 26, 2002, 4:13am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-time/8664/7 "2002-11-26T04:13:54Z")
If you look at the second one I changed it with the addition of some color - I like the contrast of the color, but I dont know if I like how I am using it… scroll up and check it out. Peace ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [November 26, 2002, 4:19am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-time/8664/8 "2002-11-26T04:19:13Z")
It makes your picture look crooked… I am getting dizzy…lol. It might be cool if you did that same line thing… but follow the side of the train. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [November 26, 2002, 4:27am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-time/8664/9 "2002-11-26T04:27:02Z")
hmmm, I’ll look into it. Thanks for the input so far, I’ll post a new one in a bit. Peace ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [November 26, 2002, 4:32am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-time/8664/10 "2002-11-26T04:32:17Z")
Sweet, can’t wait 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [November 26, 2002, 4:39am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-time/8664/11 "2002-11-26T04:39:08Z")
I tried the stipes, but they becam too distracting - mainly I just want the color so I went for this two tone look (see second one again)… I’m liking it more, but still not there. Peace ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [November 26, 2002, 4:41am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/one-more-time/8664/12 "2002-11-26T04:41:11Z")
Yeah, that does look nice 🙂 I hope you keep improving on it 🙂