# Opinions needed on wip!

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/opinions-needed-on-wip/34909>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [November 7, 2003, 7:40pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/opinions-needed-on-wip/34909 "2003-11-07T19:40:29Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 5\
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**Author:** ![brainfartmedia](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/9fc348/32.png) [@brainfartmedia](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/brainfartmedia)\
**Post date:** [November 7, 2003, 7:40pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/opinions-needed-on-wip/34909/1 "2003-11-07T19:40:29Z")

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im not sure if this is the place for this but i thought why not…  
here is an animation piece that i have been working on in flash mx… not quite finished yet… but i thought hey why not get some opinions on it, and there is no better place then here… so here goes nothing:

[http://home.1asphost.com/rambojesus/caddy.html](http://home.1asphost.com/rambojesus/caddy.html)

let me know what you think… thanks and take care…

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [November 7, 2003, 7:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/opinions-needed-on-wip/34909/2 "2003-11-07T19:58:50Z")

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there actually IS a better place for it, the site check forum… but at any rate… I think the line drawing is cool, I don’t dig the black bars at the top and bottom and the gradient floating in the middle between them, it seems like there could be a better way to frame it. I think maybe the second car should draw itself on the left side instead of the right side, it seemed a little repetitive.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [November 7, 2003, 8:55pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/opinions-needed-on-wip/34909/3 "2003-11-07T20:55:15Z")

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the black bar stinks. The line draw is pretty sweet. Jazz up the animation by adding a flashing effect or something…really good start even tho it is just an intro…we need more

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [November 7, 2003, 9:11pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/opinions-needed-on-wip/34909/4 "2003-11-07T21:11:15Z")

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Kinda short, but a good start, I like the line drawings as well and also agree that it needs more flare.

Your intro also reminds me of the Ford GT intro done by 2a, take a look, maybe it will give you more ideas.

[http://www.fordvehicles.com/fordgt/index.asp?bhcp=1](http://www.fordvehicles.com/fordgt/index.asp?bhcp=1)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [November 7, 2003, 10:25pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/opinions-needed-on-wip/34909/5 "2003-11-07T22:25:26Z")

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and make it last a bit longer, I had no time to see the thing…