# Opinions please

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/opinions-please/19198>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [April 25, 2003, 5:46am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/opinions-please/19198 "2003-04-25T05:46:46Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 5\
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**Author:** ![grimdeath](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/grimdeath/32/7124_2.png) [@grimdeath](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/grimdeath)\
**Post date:** [April 25, 2003, 5:46am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/opinions-please/19198/1 "2003-04-25T05:46:46Z")

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hey guys i jsut finished my brochure, its a 4 fold legal letter brochure check it out

P.S. the squares are just guides they wont be in the final version

[http://www.bmv-interactive.com/front.jpg](http://www.bmv-interactive.com/front.jpg)  
[http://www.bmv-interactive.com/inside.jpg](http://www.bmv-interactive.com/inside.jpg)

any input is welcomed

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [April 25, 2003, 5:52am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/opinions-please/19198/2 "2003-04-25T05:52:24Z")

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nice, i like the sepia tone feel used for your 2 images on the front, but when i go to the inside…

it looks totally uncoordinated, like they are 2 totally different pieces. maybe try to get a recurring color scheme there, or something… also, definetly lose that purple crosshair thing under “print”…

also, fix the blurry pxl fonts. other than that, nice work!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [April 25, 2003, 5:55am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/opinions-please/19198/3 "2003-04-25T05:55:42Z")

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Looking very good… but I’m with Liam on all his points. Definitely very professional start though.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [April 25, 2003, 6:06am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/opinions-please/19198/4 "2003-04-25T06:06:24Z")

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thanks for the input guys the blurry fonts ill take care of as for the inside i want to use this since my main focus is creating websites, if you visit my site you can see why i use the icons on the bottom of each section, is in order to maintain continuity with my website

my website: [http://www.bmv-interactive.com](http://www.bmv-interactive.com)

p.s. the crosshair is actually a 3d registration mark like the ones used when printing 😉

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [April 25, 2003, 7:36am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/opinions-please/19198/5 "2003-04-25T07:36:08Z")

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i really like the photos in front but ill make the same point: i dont like the window-like feel of the inside…