# Page check!
**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/page-check/11769
**Category:** Uncategorized
**Created:** [January 22, 2003, 2:22am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/page-check/11769 "2003-01-22T02:22:15Z")
**Posts on this page:** 9
**Page:** 1
### Author:  [@Alex](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Alex)
#### Post date: [January 22, 2003, 2:22am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/page-check/11769/1 "2003-01-22T02:22:15Z")
Tell me what you think. dont hold back if it is horriable please tell me. [http://alex21212.tripod.com/About\_Us.htm](http://alex21212.tripod.com/About_Us.htm)
i am 50% done with this page. i still need to add some more things.
Thanks!!
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [January 22, 2003, 2:50am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/page-check/11769/2 "2003-01-22T02:50:05Z")
Not much to comment unfortunately… But I like the colors! :beam:
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [January 22, 2003, 2:52am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/page-check/11769/3 "2003-01-22T02:52:19Z")
Hey,
Nice work. How about left justifying About Us text.
It looks strange it being in a column format with centered text.
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [January 22, 2003, 3:23am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/page-check/11769/4 "2003-01-22T03:23:50Z")
thanks for the feedback.
i am going to be adding som more things there and i will upload it when that part of my site is done.
its only 10% done:(
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [January 22, 2003, 9:08pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/page-check/11769/5 "2003-01-22T21:08:51Z")
any other comments??:beam:
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [January 22, 2003, 9:14pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/page-check/11769/6 "2003-01-22T21:14:40Z")
To be brutally honest with you I think you posted too early. You don’t appear to have done anything in the last 24hrs. If you work on it some more than post when you have quite a bit more content, I’m sure people will be glad to help [IMHO]. :-\
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [January 22, 2003, 10:59pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/page-check/11769/7 "2003-01-22T22:59:01Z")
the page is done now. i think
please some one check it out and tell me how bad it is. the link is on the first post of this thread
thanks
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [January 22, 2003, 11:38pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/page-check/11769/8 "2003-01-22T23:38:36Z")
Hmm…
There seems to be not much difference 10% and 100%. IMO
It looks like just a BASIC layout with plain colors…
You should definitely add graphics, more content, bigger layout, menu , etc.
You’re starting your page from about us., but you should have a main page with a menu - and from that menu you should point to about us. A Splash page will be nice too.
Overall there’s not much content to comment on.
You just need to put some more time and effort into it.
😏
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [January 23, 2003, 2:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/page-check/11769/9 "2003-01-23T02:16:08Z")
thats only one page… i am still working on all the other pages