# Pic **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [March 30, 2003, 8:01am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pic/16928 "2003-03-30T08:01:44Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 4\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![DyersEve](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/8797f3/32.png) [@DyersEve](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/DyersEve)\ **Post date:** [March 30, 2003, 8:01am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pic/16928/1 "2003-03-30T08:01:44Z")
Any comments or criticism on this pic? It was made out of frustration with “society”, hence the desolate tree trying to captivate my feelings of isolation from people worth a \*\*\*\*, so sorry about the grunge brush overkill. Well, just let me know. [http://teamnerd.tripod.com/random/dyersevered.txt](http://teamnerd.tripod.com/random/dyersevered.txt) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [March 30, 2003, 8:34am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pic/16928/2 "2003-03-30T08:34:05Z")
Nice! I like the tree comin’ out of the “E”! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [March 30, 2003, 9:43am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pic/16928/3 "2003-03-30T09:43:42Z")
YOu could use a bit of anti-alising in the white rectangle and maybe another more unusual font 😉 Otherwise it’s really good lookin’ ! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [March 30, 2003, 5:51pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pic/16928/4 "2003-03-30T17:51:24Z")
it could use a bit more else where, right now the brush looks outta place cuause its not balenced esle where…but other wise its a good!