# Please check my site

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-check-my-site/27566>\
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**Created:** [August 4, 2003, 5:31am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-check-my-site/27566 "2003-08-04T05:31:16Z")\
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**Author:** ![jael2222](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/j/46a35a/32.png) [@jael2222](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/jael2222)\
**Post date:** [August 4, 2003, 5:31am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-check-my-site/27566/1 "2003-08-04T05:31:16Z")

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Hi,

This is my first real flash site, so it’s still a little rough around the edges and I’m still testing/tweaking it.

If any of you have suggestions/opinions, please let me know, I’d appreciate it a lot. Thanks.

[http://www.lonelyangel.com/](http://www.lonelyangel.com/)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [August 4, 2003, 6:41am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-check-my-site/27566/2 "2003-08-04T06:41:15Z")

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very nice, you could add a few more special effect type things to the intro, like some lightning or something but it looks great. Looks like you put a lot of work into the uniformity of the html and flash sites. Great job