# Please check my test site

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-check-my-test-site/8447>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [November 21, 2002, 2:34pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-check-my-test-site/8447 "2002-11-21T14:34:00Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 5\
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**Author:** ![plaastik](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/fbc32d/32.png) [@plaastik](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/plaastik)\
**Post date:** [November 21, 2002, 2:34pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-check-my-test-site/8447/1 "2002-11-21T14:34:00Z")

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Hi

I’m working on my first Flash project at [http://www3.sympatico.ca/f.asselin/](http://www3.sympatico.ca/f.asselin/) .

Any comments weould be well appreciated!

Plaastik

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [November 21, 2002, 2:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-check-my-test-site/8447/2 "2002-11-21T14:58:12Z")

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pretty cool try and make the load txt bigger

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [November 22, 2002, 12:29pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-check-my-test-site/8447/3 "2002-11-22T12:29:54Z")

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look good as a concept…  
missing artwork section…:cyclops:

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [November 23, 2002, 7:02am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-check-my-test-site/8447/4 "2002-11-23T07:02:23Z")

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i agree you should make the loadtext bigger and you could probably add mroe effects when you change from different pages

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [November 23, 2002, 9:15am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-check-my-test-site/8447/5 "2002-11-23T09:15:22Z")

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maybe some sound would be nice, but so far it looks clean. =)
