# Please critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-critique/131671>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [December 18, 2004, 5:11am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-critique/131671 "2004-12-18T05:11:54Z")\
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**Author:** ![dragonfly](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/8e8cbc/32.png) [@dragonfly](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/dragonfly)\
**Post date:** [December 18, 2004, 5:11am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-critique/131671/1 "2004-12-18T05:11:54Z")

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this is an all flash site I’m doing for a chiropractic/etc place. Just generic preloaders for now, and I’ll need to add sound. Please let me know how I may improve it if need be.

[http://home.centurytel.net/pixelpusher/cafeoflife/](http://home.centurytel.net/pixelpusher/cafeoflife/)

Thanks!