# Please Critique
**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-critique/14416
**Category:** design
**Created:** [February 25, 2003, 11:26pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-critique/14416 "2003-02-25T23:26:09Z")
**Posts on this page:** 7
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### Author:  [@KrazyKooter](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/KrazyKooter)
#### Post date: [February 25, 2003, 11:26pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-critique/14416/1 "2003-02-25T23:26:09Z")
[http://contec.tv](http://contec.tv)
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [February 26, 2003, 12:14am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-critique/14416/2 "2003-02-26T00:14:28Z")
Here are the things I noticed:
1. The way you have your setup now isn’t very well planned. I can see that you’re using a flash and HTML combination but it isn’t very well put together. Each button opens up a new page so your content just reloads and jumbs around.
2. Most sites that I’ve seen that use this combination of flash and HTML only use flash to make their navigation and use HTML for content. Here you’re using flash for content so it’s not as smooth. You might as well go full flash and have your navigation work flawlessly with your content.
3. Design wise, I can see that you have a concept going, but the way you layed things out is very unprofessional and messy.
4. That glowman is a cool concept, but it wasn’t drawn out too well and looks too plain.
That’s about it so I hope those comments will be of some use to you, good luck. =)
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [February 27, 2003, 1:57am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-critique/14416/3 "2003-02-27T01:57:54Z")
I really want to know how you do your images like that. I want to do something similar on my site for my photography page. Could you fill me in???
As for the site. I don’t like being limited to that tiny box to view everything in. I feel trapped. For the most part though, it seemed fine.
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [February 27, 2003, 2:23pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-critique/14416/4 "2003-02-27T14:23:18Z")
I appreciate the input fron everyone!
You can learn to make the sliders here:
[http://www.kirupa.com/developer/mx/infinite.htm](http://www.kirupa.com/developer/mx/infinite.htm)
Good Luck!
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [February 28, 2003, 7:03am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-critique/14416/5 "2003-02-28T07:03:57Z")
keep learn boys…!!
anyway check [this site](http://www.itn.ac.id) please
thanks
:cowboy:
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [February 28, 2003, 4:22pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-critique/14416/6 "2003-02-28T16:22:08Z")
> \*Originally posted by KrazyKooter \*
> \*\*I appreciate the input fron everyone!
> You can learn to make the sliders here:
> **[kirupa.com - Create the Infinite Menu](https://www.kirupa.com/developer/mx/infinite.htm)**
>
> Learn how to create the coolest navigation effect, the infinite menu.
Good Luck! \*\*
Awesome thanks, I put the slider on my pictures page. Looks great.
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [February 28, 2003, 7:12pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-critique/14416/7 "2003-02-28T19:12:28Z")
i think overall it’s decent and pretty good. I can tell you are new
to design for most of the reasons that EG said.
The pic gallery is actually a nice touch. I think you did that very
well and it’s functional to your site’s purpose.
Here’s my few suggestions:
1. Drop that red color. Awful color for a business site.
2. Drop the font you chose. that Batman font is a free font that
everyone in the world has, and it’s unoriginal.
3. Decide on html OR Flash. the way the site is layed out, you
should be using one or the other, not both. I think you should go
with 100% flash, as it’s pretty much there already.
4. uhh…“Glowman” ?? :whistle:
5. the footer for navigation is unnecessary since your site is really
short in length. and if nothing else, you should make it the same
color as your site, and not bright red.
Sorry if these come off harsh, they aren’t meant to be. I just think
you could use some more planning and good advice from us here
at kirupa. Take it as you wish.
I think your site is very good, but could be WAY BETTER with just
a few improvements.
Good luck!
/unflux
:goatee: