# Please play with this

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-play-with-this/20792>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [May 13, 2003, 2:27pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-play-with-this/20792 "2003-05-13T14:27:12Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 6\
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**Author:** ![StoreKit](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/e47c2d/32.png) [@StoreKit](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/StoreKit)\
**Post date:** [May 13, 2003, 2:27pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-play-with-this/20792/1 "2003-05-13T14:27:12Z")

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My friends and I just finished this e-commerce extension for Flash MX. Please check it out, play with it and let me know what you think.  
Thanks

[StoreKit](http://www.storekit.com)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [May 15, 2003, 9:40am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-play-with-this/20792/2 "2003-05-15T09:40:36Z")

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Hm… I don’t like it that much… the text is difficult to read, it’s too small, too simple, too weird. Rethink the ‘fantasy’ art (lines and circle) on the splash page, it’s not matching the background that well.

Try to bring more structure in your pages. Use a layout, not just a white rectangle with some text in it. Also, avoid light blue and black. Those are tricky colours to combine… sometimes it works, but most of the time it doesn’t.

OK, now go for it! 😉

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [May 16, 2003, 4:14am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-play-with-this/20792/3 "2003-05-16T04:14:34Z")

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If you want to use flash, try to make it more animated. There is nothing going on your website and i just don’t see why you had to build it in flash. Also, try to put a border around the whole website and center it. It’s not too bad but it needs much more work.

peace

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [May 16, 2003, 4:40am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-play-with-this/20792/4 "2003-05-16T04:40:08Z")

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h o w c o m e y o u p u t s p a c e s i n b e t w e e n e v e r y l e t t e r ?

🙂

-teet

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [May 16, 2003, 4:41am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-play-with-this/20792/5 "2003-05-16T04:41:51Z")

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oh yeah…the title of your page is “index1”

i’m not sure if you wanted it that way or not

-teet

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [May 16, 2003, 5:19am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-play-with-this/20792/6 "2003-05-16T05:19:36Z")

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Hey guys thanks for all the feedback it really helps. I wiill post a new version of the site soon.

Thanks again.