# Please re-check my site

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-re-check-my-site/109391>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [May 5, 2004, 3:56am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-re-check-my-site/109391 "2004-05-05T03:56:08Z")\
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**Author:** ![vaguemedia](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/v/54ee81/32.png) [@vaguemedia](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/vaguemedia)\
**Post date:** [May 5, 2004, 3:56am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-re-check-my-site/109391/1 "2004-05-05T03:56:08Z")

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I posted this site last weekend, really wasn’t finished(and probably shouldn’t have posted it).

I just finished up(for the most part), and think it’s came a long way.

Tell me what you think. It’s not 5megs, I promise.

Thanks  
Nick

[http://mywebpages.comcast.net/nickgrady/test.htm](http://mywebpages.comcast.net/nickgrady/test.htm)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [May 5, 2004, 2:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-re-check-my-site/109391/2 "2004-05-05T14:43:10Z")

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hi, I’m new on kirupa, just “walking around”, I’ve find this topic…  
Take a look on outlines of your page layout, I’ve see some lines bigger than others…  
… and sorry 4 my terrible english!  
Bye!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [May 5, 2004, 3:29pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-re-check-my-site/109391/3 "2004-05-05T15:29:46Z")

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well, to be honest, the layout is okay, but it has a very corperate/templatey feel to it. This, coupled with the music selection comes across as institutional in feel. Ultimately, from a design standpoint I think it lacks elegance.

The color scheme could be experimented with.

I personally don’t like horz. image scrollers that don’t have a seperate timeline control.

I would place an image with every page of copy. I would organize the copy in a more “graphically pleasing” manner.

All the transitions are exactely the same.

The audio turns off, but once you select a button it turns on again.

The text is fuzzy. Check the x/y position.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [May 5, 2004, 6:04pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/please-re-check-my-site/109391/4 "2004-05-05T18:04:31Z")

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> well, to be honest, the layout is okay

mmm…  
beware of outlines! 🙂