# Pls critique my site **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [April 30, 2003, 7:38am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655 "2003-04-30T07:38:16Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 16\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![thybalt](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/e5b9ba/32.png) [@thybalt](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/thybalt)\ **Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 7:38am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/1 "2003-04-30T07:38:16Z")
Need comments/critique to improve my site šŸ™‚ [http://www20.brinkster.com/thybalt/index.htm](http://www20.brinkster.com/thybalt/index.htm) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 8:10am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/2 "2003-04-30T08:10:38Z")
Coolā€¦canā€™t wait to see the rest of the content. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 8:58am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/3 "2003-04-30T08:58:54Z")
Love it. Soundtrack is cool. Love that falling intro. canā€™t wait for intro tooā€¦ change the font on the loading part. also the logo on the first page looks funny. it kinda blury ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 9:05am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/4 "2003-04-30T09:05:31Z")
thanks for the comments, will keep them in mind! i am planning to change the logo because i will its very trendwhore too with the arrow and stuff. i couldnā€™t help using it when i started making it ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 4:48pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/5 "2003-04-30T16:48:00Z")
Visually, I love the site. But personally, the ā€œpopupā€ style Flash gets on my nervesā€¦ I brought up the link, hit ā€œenterā€ and a movie pops up that I have to drag upward to view. Now, if you like the ā€œpopupā€ style, then keep it. Thatā€™s cool, but I would consider making it ALL fit inside the screen. Or, use the same Flash work in the same windowā€¦ Good Job!! :-\ ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 1, 2003, 2:20am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/6 "2003-05-01T02:20:54Z")
thanks JMK I did realise that you need to drag it up a bit because thereā€™s still a little toolbar in the window which i canā€™t get rid off, probably i used the wrong popup code. may considered just dumping the flash in the same window too tho ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 1, 2003, 2:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/7 "2003-05-01T02:54:55Z")
Anytime thyā€¦ Again, great work and stay on it !:crazy: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 1, 2003, 6:15am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/8 "2003-05-01T06:15:30Z")
looks good. i would keep the arrow. seems to really work for the typography, especially the liquid design font. the tech look is in because itā€™s visually appealing. if it really bothers you, i would suggest some other wingding type character to replace it. flash animation is great, but a siteā€™s design is what makes a strong impact on the viewer and potential clients. thatā€™s my 2 cents. nick [vaguemediagroup.com](http://vaguemediagroup.com) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 1, 2003, 7:57am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/9 "2003-05-01T07:57:24Z")
thank you vaguemedia for the suggestions =) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 1, 2003, 9:07am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/10 "2003-05-01T09:07:32Z")
very nice keep flashing! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 4, 2003, 6:46am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/11 "2003-05-04T06:46:09Z")
nice work mate, iā€™ll comment when you get some more parts finished, everything looks fine at the moment. great work. šŸ™‚ ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 4, 2003, 8:45am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/12 "2003-05-04T08:45:04Z")
I like it šŸ™‚ I noticed this very unimportant ā€˜bugā€™: the ā€˜craterā€™ your logo makes when smashing on the ground, is back straightened some time later. I know, itā€™s very minor ā€¦ šŸ™‚ ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 5, 2003, 1:11am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/13 "2003-05-05T01:11:11Z")
Thanks soulty and vendi. i know itā€™s like 10% complete without any real content in any of the sections so iā€™ll try to do myself some justice by putting stuff up there soon, and also to you guys so its easier to critique. Voetsjoeba youā€™re very observant, I didnā€™t notice that the crater filled itself up! Iā€™ll fix that when I update it thanks :beam: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 5, 2003, 2:29am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/14 "2003-05-05T02:29:45Z")
- I see \<%@LANGUAGE=ā€œJAVASCRIPTā€ CODEPAGE=ā€œ1252ā€%\> in the upper left corner of your intro screen. I donā€™t think you want that! - Navigation should be ā€˜on rolloverā€™ not ā€˜on clickā€™. It will make it easier for people. - Should be able to turn off monotonous music somehow. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 5, 2003, 2:35am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/15 "2003-05-05T02:35:04Z")
thanks supree ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 5, 2003, 2:37am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/pls-critique-my-site/19655/16 "2003-05-05T02:37:44Z")
no, keep on release. Theres a rollover effect and some people like to go through the menus without selecting something. - i agree with a turn off music button.