# Plz check this intro for me **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [August 13, 2002, 10:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/plz-check-this-intro-for-me/4556 "2002-08-13T10:54:34Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 3\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![sukh](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/c0e974/32.png) [@sukh](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/sukh)\ **Post date:** [August 13, 2002, 10:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/plz-check-this-intro-for-me/4556/1 "2002-08-13T10:54:34Z")
hi…any comments good or bad plz…its not too long but hopefully it wil fit the image of an art gallery…the actual site it will link to is also being re-designed by me as the existing site is a bit hard 2 navigate and naff!!! cheers!! [http://212.240.62.66/sukhi/index.html](http://212.240.62.66/sukhi/index.html) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 13, 2002, 3:01pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/plz-check-this-intro-for-me/4556/2 "2002-08-13T15:01:55Z")
Hi there I just had a look at your intro think, it’s Ok, but the swish imploding text mmmmm. But i hate swish. It’s a bit easy to go ott with it, stay subtle. But over all i like it. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 20, 2002, 12:24am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/plz-check-this-intro-for-me/4556/3 "2002-08-20T00:24:43Z")
i like it only problem i have is the grey on white text, kinda hard to see:-\