# Portfolio Critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/portfolio-critique/70715>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [November 16, 2004, 7:56pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/portfolio-critique/70715 "2004-11-16T19:56:15Z")\
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**Author:** ![pizzaguy234](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/a587f6/32.png) [@pizzaguy234](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/pizzaguy234)\
**Post date:** [November 16, 2004, 7:56pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/portfolio-critique/70715/1 "2004-11-16T19:56:15Z")

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Hello people, this is my first go at a flash portfolio site, so i want to try and get it right, or at least close.

to save a full redesign, after you have expressed ur expert views on it, here is the menu and home page, links go nowhere, but will do eventually,

if u could give an opinion on colour, nav, style, and such like, then i can look to improve,

i had better give you the link i spose - [http://www.criticalwebdesign.co.uk/test/indexflash.htm](http://www.criticalwebdesign.co.uk/test/indexflash.htm)

thanks for your words in advance. andy.