# Poster crit please!

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/poster-crit-please/154659>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [July 11, 2005, 8:27pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/poster-crit-please/154659 "2005-07-11T20:27:38Z")\
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**Author:** ![thomjjames](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/dc4da7/32.png) [@thomjjames](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/thomjjames)\
**Post date:** [July 11, 2005, 8:27pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/poster-crit-please/154659/1 "2005-07-11T20:27:38Z")

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I’m not a great graphic designer or illustrator [web designer by trade] but i trying to improve so i’ve got myself a poster to do for an entertainments company. came up with a few concepts but i progressed with this one.  
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 ![](http://forum.kirupa.com/uploads/kirupa/1519/8acdb842b468d37e.jpg)

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![](http://forum.kirupa.com/uploads/kirupa/1522/4598dba7de0e2631.jpg)

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![](http://forum.kirupa.com/uploads/kirupa/1523/1690692ebb316eed.jpg)

what do you reckon, which one and any suggestions? constructive crit please!!

Thanks  
Tom