# Preliminary Cyborg **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [February 25, 2003, 5:05pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369 "2003-02-25T17:05:29Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Kitiara](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/k/7ab992/32.png) [@Kitiara](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Kitiara)\ **Post date:** [February 25, 2003, 5:05pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/1 "2003-02-25T17:05:29Z")
For the battle thread… This is the first version of my Robot entry. Just plain ol’ line art. 🙂 Need to get some kind of background for her though. This is where I always struggle. Argh. ![](http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/tech/Robot_Cyborg.gif) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 25, 2003, 5:32pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/2 "2003-02-25T17:32:08Z")
Awesome as usual. Although I think there is something up with her head. Perhaps it is the big loop in her hair, or the fact that shes missing an eye, I can’t quite put my finger on it. And the gun perspective seems to be a bit off, look at the handle that comes out of the bottom of the hand, it doesn’t match up with the rest. \<— me being picky don’t mind me it is great!!! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 25, 2003, 5:38pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/3 "2003-02-25T17:38:12Z")
Woof…!! Sexxxyyy! :beam: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 25, 2003, 6:11pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/4 "2003-02-25T18:11:36Z")
… :!: … :stunned: … … :love: … :love: … :love: … ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 25, 2003, 6:17pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/5 "2003-02-25T18:17:59Z")
wow thats really cool… impressive actually… wish i could draw that well =)… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 25, 2003, 7:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/6 "2003-02-25T19:43:22Z")
whoa momma!! what a hottie!! :crazy: That’s very impressive Kit, great job. =) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 25, 2003, 7:55pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/7 "2003-02-25T19:55:27Z")
Hello man, Same comments as the others and more wish i can do such a drawing =) But simple comment: if you can make the hair go over her cyborg eye a little bit it will be more realistic as you see the left edge of that eye is as if making the boundry of the hair at that area. again it is awesome :geek: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 25, 2003, 8:15pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/8 "2003-02-25T20:15:08Z")
holy sh!t… very good… the only thing i saw is that something isnt right with her finger on the trigger of the pistol… cant describe… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 25, 2003, 8:59pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/9 "2003-02-25T20:59:17Z")
nice drawing, i suggest that you see her thumb through the trigger of the pistol in the background. that might be drawn in a right way, but i would give the thumb a darker color because it is further in the background. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 26, 2003, 9:52am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/10 "2003-02-26T09:52:03Z")
Thanks for the comments guys, much appreciated. 🙂 I’ve discovered that I’m really no good at drawing guns. My other half has this kind of BB gun thing at home, and I used that as a base, but just can’t seem to get the things looking realistic… On closer inspection, I think the problem does indeed lie with the bottom bit that’s in her hand. That’s out of perspective. No idea how I managed that. Hmm. Hands are not my strong point either. 🙂 Lost, good point on the hair. That probably needs to drop over her face a little. And I want to give her a Borg type of eye, like a red light, but line art isn’t cutting it for drawing that. Might have to cheat with photoshop a little. 🙂 And I still need to think of a background! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 26, 2003, 6:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/11 "2003-02-26T18:00:53Z")
I think the gun overall looks good, just that bottom handle 🙂 And hmm, I am interested in this red eye thing your going to do :beam: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 26, 2003, 7:59pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/12 "2003-02-26T19:59:47Z")
hands are hard to draw, but the most difficult thing is to make the hands hold something… a gun is very hard, i always use these bb-things too 😛 wanna see some gun i made? [http://195.230.176.35/images/hitman0r1.png](http://195.230.176.35/images/hitman0r1.png) this was my first attempt to draw with my wacom and fireworks… i saw that hitman2-wallpaper and thought it would look quite cool to have my own face on it… i drew it by hand on a good ol’ sheet, scanned it and overdrew it with fireworks… i think i spent hours drawing my hands with a bb-gun in them… thats not easy… 😏 [http://195.230.176.35/images/xm177full.jpg](http://195.230.176.35/images/xm177full.jpg) this one is done with swift 3d… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 26, 2003, 8:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/13 "2003-02-26T20:58:50Z")
Incredibly cool! I think there’s nothing much worng with the gun but the right hand is a bit off. it’s like… rubber or sth… =) and fishtank! Nice pictures! very cool! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 26, 2003, 9:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/14 "2003-02-26T21:03:00Z")
thanks man :sure: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 26, 2003, 10:17pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/15 "2003-02-26T22:17:59Z")
Hands really are a pain to draw at the best of times. And if they’re holding anything… Well, it’s easier if you’re drawing from life, but you try holding a gun and drawing it at the same time. 🙂 Nice pics, Fishtank. Maybe I should have gotten you to do the gun for me… 😛 Lost, if you can make a shining eye like a Terminator, then you da man. 🙂 I’d put the battle entry down as a collaboration… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 26, 2003, 10:52pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/16 "2003-02-26T22:52:28Z")
whooo, yeah, whooo !!! :crazy: thanks for that… 😊 that pushed me again and rescued me from jumping out of the window… 😉 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 27, 2003, 12:36am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/17 "2003-02-27T00:36:10Z")
😉 [terminator3](http://www.terminator3.com/) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 27, 2003, 10:45am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/18 "2003-02-27T10:45:19Z")
T3? Coooooool… 🙂 I just tried giving her a second eye. How did it look? In a word - cacky. Lost! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 27, 2003, 3:38pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/19 "2003-02-27T15:38:17Z")
Right, now with a background and a couple of PS effects. Still can’t get the eye right though. 😱 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 27, 2003, 6:33pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369/20 "2003-02-27T18:33:57Z")
sorry kitty my dear… but the shadow on that last pic is tottaly off. it seams like she is a cardboard figure leaning on a wall :-\ [Next page](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/preliminary-cyborg/14369.md?page=2)