# Print ad critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/print-ad-critique/242592>\
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**Created:** [October 28, 2007, 6:10am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/print-ad-critique/242592 "2007-10-28T06:10:09Z")\
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**Author:** ![dravalanche](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/8797f3/32.png) [@dravalanche](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/dravalanche)\
**Post date:** [October 28, 2007, 6:10am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/print-ad-critique/242592/1 "2007-10-28T06:10:09Z")

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hi, I got ask to put something together for a magazine ad and was supplied a couple of images + text to build it. I’ve only really just started but I wanted to see what you all think? Due to the content and ad shape there’s certain limits in a way with what I can do. Any ideas or critiques would be appreciated  
 ![](http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2622/billyelliotlayout03pe7.jpg)