# Review these couple of flyers **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [September 29, 2004, 11:14pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/review-these-couple-of-flyers/65836 "2004-09-29T23:14:40Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 13\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![berkoWitZ](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/b9bd4f/32.png) [@berkoWitZ](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/berkoWitZ)\ **Post date:** [September 29, 2004, 11:14pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/review-these-couple-of-flyers/65836/1 "2004-09-29T23:14:40Z")
Hi, Im trying to convince a client who wants to make a flyer with vector art that Im good in it:P Thats why Im going to show him these 2 small examples, I know they´re not the best vector art u have ever seen but Im trying to learn, please tell me what do u people think, thanks! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 29, 2004, 11:30pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/review-these-couple-of-flyers/65836/2 "2004-09-29T23:30:47Z")
with marcela: fonts and layout are fine, but the look in her eyes just doesn’t feel right. i believe its mostly the curve of “light” above her left eye that makes it too unsymmetrical. basically its a psychological truth that symmetrical faces are considered beatiful, so perhaps you might want to make her prettier… 🙂 with dani: the face looks great, i personally don’t like the way the “9” looks in your font there, it’s too round, but maybe that’s just me… 😉 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 29, 2004, 11:41pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/review-these-couple-of-flyers/65836/3 "2004-09-29T23:41:42Z")
great thanks! yes the eyes are always an issue, what I made this time was just hide more her face, like in the second pic, I think it looks better, also ur right about the font in the second one, I´ll change it 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 29, 2004, 11:53pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/review-these-couple-of-flyers/65836/4 "2004-09-29T23:53:10Z")
great idea with moving her, you could try to give her a just a very little more, so that a slightly more of her left eye is covered, i just put a piece of paper on the screen and if i cover her up till her left eye is completely hidden and only the last piece of her left eyebrow can be seen, it feels perfect for me… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 30, 2004, 12:38am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/review-these-couple-of-flyers/65836/5 "2004-09-30T00:38:59Z")
cool, ur right again, I´ll make it :thumb: what about the colors??? I also want to see how they look like with some grunge brushes… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 30, 2004, 3:17pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/review-these-couple-of-flyers/65836/6 "2004-09-30T15:17:02Z")
anyone else??? ☹ I change this one a little more… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 30, 2004, 4:11pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/review-these-couple-of-flyers/65836/7 "2004-09-30T16:11:52Z")
“dani” 's colors are perfect :thumb: to me, “marcela” is too bright now, i’d like to see more of the gradient you used at the top right corner, i wonder how some “warm” colors would look on her, like orange…? 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 30, 2004, 4:26pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/review-these-couple-of-flyers/65836/8 "2004-09-30T16:26:08Z")
or pink… PINK IS PURTY. So is Prune and Bordeau (heavier reds - #993300 types of red and #993399 types of purple…) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 30, 2004, 4:42pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/review-these-couple-of-flyers/65836/9 "2004-09-30T16:42:46Z")
ok, an orange and a pink version, doesnt look that bad… 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 30, 2004, 5:21pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/review-these-couple-of-flyers/65836/10 "2004-09-30T17:21:58Z")
pink wins :thumb: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 1, 2004, 1:22am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/review-these-couple-of-flyers/65836/11 "2004-10-01T01:22:34Z")
thanks man, yea, hate to say it, but it looks good in pink ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 1, 2004, 1:29pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/review-these-couple-of-flyers/65836/12 "2004-10-01T13:29:35Z")
i like the pink :love: it actually looks good (in this case) , what are these for anyway? ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 1, 2004, 11:53pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/review-these-couple-of-flyers/65836/13 "2004-10-01T23:53:20Z")
well, I have to show them to a posibble client who wants to make some flyers about a party. similar to these ones 🙂