# Revision 2 critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/revision-2-critique/229633>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [June 19, 2007, 3:38am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/revision-2-critique/229633 "2007-06-19T03:38:28Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 1\
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**Author:** ![lacohido](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/l/e8c25b/32.png) [@lacohido](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/lacohido)\
**Post date:** [June 19, 2007, 3:38am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/revision-2-critique/229633/1 "2007-06-19T03:38:28Z")

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Hi all-  
I put up revision 1 of my site a couple weeks ago and got some really great feedback, so here is revision 2:

[Revision 2](http://lee.acohido.com)

[Revision 1](http://lee.acohido.com/old_stuff/draft4/)

[Original Site](http://leepenceguitar.com)

Thanks!!!