# Rikiwaka's intro **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [September 8, 2004, 6:55pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640 "2004-09-08T18:55:33Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 19\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![rikiwaka](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/5fc32e/32.png) [@rikiwaka](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/rikiwaka)\ **Post date:** [September 8, 2004, 6:55pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/1 "2004-09-08T18:55:33Z")
hello here is my intro for aids awareness … music or sound will be added soon … :mu: [http://www.ontheground.be/aids\_awareness.html](http://www.ontheground.be/aids_awareness.html) critics are welcome … ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 8, 2004, 10:51pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/2 "2004-09-08T22:51:38Z")
nice one! 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 8, 2004, 10:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/3 "2004-09-08T22:58:57Z")
Ohhh, we have a WINNER!!! Lol, that is very nice… good job. :thumb: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 8, 2004, 10:59pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/4 "2004-09-08T22:59:00Z")
simple yet pretty effective. I have to say, some of the typography is shocking, but it doesn’t really detract. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 8, 2004, 11:05pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/5 "2004-09-08T23:05:12Z")
w00t! very nice!!! 😃 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 8, 2004, 11:07pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/6 "2004-09-08T23:07:13Z")
🙂 yeah! it’s very nice!! 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 8, 2004, 11:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/7 "2004-09-08T23:43:53Z")
this is the best one I’ve seen so far =] One thing, the phrase “Are you sure to be protected?” seems a bit awkward. maybe just “are you protected?” or "are you sure that you are protected?" just my $0.02. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 9, 2004, 12:32am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/8 "2004-09-09T00:32:14Z")
I agree with drew. Nice job. Also, the word spacing on the last bit looks a little weird. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 9, 2004, 3:56am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/9 "2004-09-09T03:56:50Z")
Great jorb!! Except I think it isn’t quite 30 seconds long ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 9, 2004, 5:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/10 "2004-09-09T05:16:02Z")
just a one word “best” ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 9, 2004, 7:18am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/11 "2004-09-09T07:18:50Z")
yup also lovin it! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 9, 2004, 9:59am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/12 "2004-09-09T09:59:21Z")
thanks for all critics … and thanks for the correction of my english grammar… ( I usually speek french) 😊 i’m working on the sound … ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 9, 2004, 3:11pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/13 "2004-09-09T15:11:55Z")
ok the sound is on … ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 10, 2004, 1:50am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/14 "2004-09-10T01:50:34Z")
Dude, this is great. The sound does flow with this intro completely. I suggest making it more “in your face” because it is an issue that affects us all. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 10, 2004, 2:12pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/15 "2004-09-10T14:12:38Z")
It’s great man! When you mentioned you speak french, I looked at your location and you’re in Brussels! That’s my capital! Belgium ownz! :love: :thumb: :beam: **edit** : if I’d been smart, I could’ve gotten it from the .be link as well. …but I’m not :beam: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 15, 2004, 2:02am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/16 "2004-09-15T02:02:23Z")
Very nice job! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 18, 2004, 9:02pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/17 "2004-09-18T21:02:24Z")
I like it alot… Simple but very effective. You make the music for it? At first I thought it was the drumline to Rolling Stones “Please allow me to introduce myself” I almost shat my pants… That would of been fly. (meaning the music, not the shat) :p: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 30, 2004, 4:56am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/18 "2004-09-30T04:56:29Z")
nicely done but i think the theme should be about aids awareness (?). ---
**Author:** ![ultranet](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/u/8491ac/32.png) [@ultranet](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/ultranet)\ **Post date:** [October 25, 2006, 11:32am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rikiwakas-intro/63640/19 "2006-10-25T11:32:43Z")
A simple piece of great work… nice work dude!!!