# Room magazine

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/room-magazine/185984>\
**Category:** contests\
**Created:** [April 18, 2006, 8:07am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/room-magazine/185984 "2006-04-18T08:07:11Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 5\
**Page:** 1

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**Author:** ![sandmans](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/91b2a8/32.png) [@sandmans](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/sandmans)\
**Post date:** [April 18, 2006, 8:07am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/room-magazine/185984/1 "2006-04-18T08:07:11Z")

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Here’s my entry. 2nd version already.  
 ![](http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/8387/roommagazine25ak.th.jpg)  
[[URL=“http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/8387/roommagazine25ak.jpg”]ROOM Magazine V2 (full size)](http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/7668/roommagazine5am.jpg)

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**Author:** ![williby27](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/williby27/32/1501_2.png) [@williby27](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/williby27)\
**Post date:** [April 18, 2006, 8:44am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/room-magazine/185984/2 "2006-04-18T08:44:10Z")

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its looking pretty good but a bit plain with the text. Maybe some different positioning, font sizes, better contrasts etc

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**Author:** ![sandmans](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/91b2a8/32.png) [@sandmans](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/sandmans)\
**Post date:** [April 18, 2006, 9:57am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/room-magazine/185984/3 "2006-04-18T09:57:57Z")

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Version 2. An unnoticeable change of font and positioning of titles (-:[URL=“[http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/8387/roommagazine25ak.jpg](http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/8387/roommagazine25ak.jpg)”]

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**Author:** ![williby27](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/williby27/32/1501_2.png) [@williby27](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/williby27)\
**Post date:** [April 18, 2006, 12:41pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/room-magazine/185984/4 "2006-04-18T12:41:33Z")

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thats a lot better 🙂

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**Author:** ![kirupa](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/kirupa/32/11616_2.png) [@kirupa](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/kirupa)\
**Post date:** [April 18, 2006, 2:17pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/room-magazine/185984/5 "2006-04-18T14:17:40Z")

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You should place the second version in your first post itself, for judges might not scroll down to see revisions in a thread 😉