# Rough draft concept critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rough-draft-concept-critique/174171>\
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**Created:** [January 3, 2006, 2:25pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rough-draft-concept-critique/174171 "2006-01-03T14:25:19Z")\
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**Author:** ![ancora](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/b487fb/32.png) [@ancora](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/ancora)\
**Post date:** [January 3, 2006, 2:25pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/rough-draft-concept-critique/174171/1 "2006-01-03T14:25:19Z")

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[**LINK**](http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/3346/television9fd.jpg)

This concept is for a music site, i went with the television thing and am making the site look like its a video clip on the television.

i just wanted to get some comments and crtiques on the rough draft i have atm. THE DESIGN IS NOT FINISHED, there is still alot more to add like cords etc etc. But before i continue i wanted to see if there is anything i should change e.g, colour, size, etc etc.

there is no tv stand to speak of as i wanted to give the illusion that the tv is hanging on the wall like a flat screen tv if you know what i mean. the background will most likely change to a wallpaper style but still thinking that one over.

thanks

ancora