# Second Attempt - Layout

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/second-attempt-layout/11997>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [January 25, 2003, 12:49am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/second-attempt-layout/11997 "2003-01-25T00:49:05Z")\
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**Author:** ![metalguy](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/e47774/32.png) [@metalguy](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/metalguy)\
**Post date:** [January 25, 2003, 12:49am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/second-attempt-layout/11997/1 "2003-01-25T00:49:05Z")

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Alright, my first flash webapage wasn’t a great hit ([Click Here ) so here’s my second attempt at it: [URL=http://mywebpages.comcast.net/metalguy211/test/index.html]Click Here](http://mywebpages.comcast.net/metalguy211/flashhomepage/vs2/)

Before you click heres the rundown. That big gaping white space on the left will be where content is… it will be the same style floating window deal that the first site has… different windows, but same idea, only bigger and able to hold content. It will also have a picture in the background… that changes every time someone clicks on a menu item… something like the initial picture you see on the first page. The radio will have songs, but my space limitations on the server won’t allow any test songs with the other site on there. Menu, all of that is the same.

So tell me what you think about the layout and all of that… keep in mind its my second flash site… so be merciful 🙂

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [January 25, 2003, 1:53am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/second-attempt-layout/11997/2 "2003-01-25T01:53:30Z")

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lookin greatttt!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [January 25, 2003, 1:57am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/second-attempt-layout/11997/3 "2003-01-25T01:57:32Z")

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I like it, very simple and clean. Only suggestion on what you have so far is maybe adding 1 more color to your existing color scheme just to make it more interesting. That’s only an option though, but I think it’s already good the way it is. Good job. =)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [January 25, 2003, 3:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/second-attempt-layout/11997/4 "2003-01-25T03:16:10Z")

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Off to a good start.  
I personally would change the font. The one you used looks crusty at a small size.  
How about left justifying the text on the left hand side or, right justifying it on the right hand side  
You have it right justified on the left hand side and that looks strange [to me].

I like the fluid movement of the animation.  
Apart from that, not much else to look at yet.