# Sharing/critique some P.O.S material **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [February 20, 2004, 11:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215 "2004-02-20T23:03:02Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 17\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![DDD](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/9fc348/32.png) [@DDD](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/DDD)\ **Post date:** [February 20, 2004, 11:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/1 "2004-02-20T23:03:02Z")
Hey ya’ll I have not posted anything for a while so I thought I would share slash ask for a critique. Here are 2 sample of a email campaign layout. (content is kinda blank since they have not given it to me yet). But if ya’ll could tell me what layout you prefer and why. It is for a wine company called gallo (all stuff is trademarked an copywritten). this is one of their new wines. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 20, 2004, 11:04pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/2 "2004-02-20T23:04:11Z")
and this one ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 20, 2004, 11:05pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/3 "2004-02-20T23:05:23Z")
or this one ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 20, 2004, 11:16pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/4 "2004-02-20T23:16:18Z")
I don’t see any diff between the two last ones… Looks very professionnal and smooth; really good. The only minor thing that bothers me is the glow on the bottle; maybe a shadow (dark glow rather) would make it blend in more - or on the other extreme increase the glow… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 20, 2004, 11:19pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/5 "2004-02-20T23:19:32Z")
i really like the second one 🙂 and i agree that a darker glow would look better 🙂 nice work man 😃 that is awesome ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 20, 2004, 11:24pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/6 "2004-02-20T23:24:41Z")
thanks gents…I will try that. On the last 2. The content area has the slight bull watermark and one does not. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 20, 2004, 11:40pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/7 "2004-02-20T23:40:38Z")
hehe i cant even see the bull on my monitor unless i highlight it 😛 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 21, 2004, 9:18am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/8 "2004-02-21T09:18:16Z")
They look very nice and professional DDD. I prefer the second one, because of the cards. They complete the look. Great job ! :thumb: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 21, 2004, 9:26am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/9 "2004-02-21T09:26:04Z")
I prefer the first one, just because it has the focus on the bottle. With the cards added I think it looses this focus. but that’s just my €0.02 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 21, 2004, 9:38am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/10 "2004-02-21T09:38:22Z")
the second one is great 😉 Top stuff mate ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 21, 2004, 9:39am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/11 "2004-02-21T09:39:20Z")
I like the first one and the second one. Like the bull design. Nice stuff 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 21, 2004, 1:27pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/12 "2004-02-21T13:27:23Z")
I can’t see the watermark either and I’m on a standard monitor - but if it works for print… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 21, 2004, 4:09pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/13 "2004-02-21T16:09:08Z")
yeah good point, they were designed with PMS in mind so colors maybe a little off on monitors. But thanks guys. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 21, 2004, 4:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/14 "2004-02-21T16:43:44Z")
Hmm, i wonder if you couldn’t kind of bring the bottle more into focus, because it almost seems like the cards are the more important item in the image, while the bottle almost seems to be lurking there in the darkness, waiting to pounce on unsuspecting passerbys… but that’s just my opinon. I think the bottle needs to appear Bolder, since it’s “BIG **BOLD** ZIN”… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 21, 2004, 4:59pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/15 "2004-02-21T16:59:39Z")
ill post some updated images in a bit here. Thanks for the feedback guys… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 21, 2004, 6:27pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/16 "2004-02-21T18:27:24Z")
i agree with people who like the first one. 🙂 i think that looks great! 🙂 2 and 3 need more emphasis on the product (wine bottle) so maybe you can drop the opacity on the cards, or make them a more subtle back ground image. it has to accompany the image not take it over. Concepts are looking great though dude, once you get the rest of the content, it will really show which design will shine. 😉 cheers .soulty ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [February 21, 2004, 7:05pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sharing-critique-some-p-o-s-material/102215/17 "2004-02-21T19:05:27Z")
I like one the most… it gives the bottle more focus, as others have said. But they’re all really great, good work 🙂