# Signature Critique **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [July 15, 2004, 2:40am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/signature-critique/57652 "2004-07-15T02:40:06Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 10\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![CagedApe](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/87869e/32.png) [@CagedApe](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/CagedApe)\ **Post date:** [July 15, 2004, 2:40am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/signature-critique/57652/1 "2004-07-15T02:40:06Z")
Well I’ve made my first real signature. Please tell me what you think and any suggestions you have. Keep in mind that I’m a beginner at Photoshop. **Version 1:** ``` [img]http://www.cagedape.com/images/daksig3.jpg[/img] ``` \*\*Version 2: \*\* ![](http://www.cagedape.com/images/daksig4.jpg) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 15, 2004, 2:45am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/signature-critique/57652/2 "2004-07-15T02:45:32Z")
Hi dak, I think it looks great I really like the metal texture but the bullet holes are all identical. Also, the screws are a little too big for my taste and I’d lose the emboss on the [cagedape.com](http://cagedape.com) text. O yea, try playing around with the lighting effects. I think it would probably make the metal texture look even cooler. Nice work! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 15, 2004, 3:00am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/signature-critique/57652/3 "2004-07-15T03:00:10Z")
Thanks CanadianGuy. I took your advice and also added some scratches in the metal. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 15, 2004, 3:44am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/signature-critique/57652/4 "2004-07-15T03:44:59Z")
Looking great Dak! Just need to move those bolts in a little more, and make them smaller! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 15, 2004, 3:59am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/signature-critique/57652/5 "2004-07-15T03:59:32Z")
I like’em. I would go with the top one, but with smaller bolts. Also footer max size on this planet is 300 x 60 I think. -Cheers ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 15, 2004, 4:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/signature-critique/57652/6 "2004-07-15T04:16:59Z")
Well this isn’t for Kirupa, its for my forums on [www.cagedape.com](http://www.cagedape.com). And I updated it with Grinches suggestions. I just replaced version 2 so it doesnt take up too much space. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 15, 2004, 4:27am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/signature-critique/57652/7 "2004-07-15T04:27:09Z")
cool. So you’re not going to put on a footer for us? What… so cagescape is better than us? Why don’t you love us? 😛 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 15, 2004, 4:58am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/signature-critique/57652/8 "2004-07-15T04:58:03Z")
haha cagedape is his. I showed Dak to KF, but he still hasn’t gotten that sudden vacuum of obsession 😉 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 15, 2004, 4:59am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/signature-critique/57652/9 "2004-07-15T04:59:29Z")
Heh. I’ll make a sig for here when I’m not so busy getting ready to launch my site 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 15, 2004, 8:41am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/signature-critique/57652/10 "2004-07-15T08:41:17Z")
sorry mate but i dont really like it. its a nice start but just seems… erm… um fat. anyway its a good attempt Peace