# Site Check Please

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-check-please/34510
**Category:** Uncategorized
**Created:** [November 3, 2003, 12:53pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-check-please/34510 "2003-11-03T12:53:52Z")
**Posts on this page:** 5
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### Author: ![fordprefect666](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/f/e56c9b/32.png) [@fordprefect666](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/fordprefect666)
#### Post date: [November 3, 2003, 12:53pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-check-please/34510/1 "2003-11-03T12:53:52Z")

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Hello!

Some critique on this site that I have made for my downloadable Java game for mobile phones. The link is [www.redeemergames.com](http://www.redeemergames.com)

Thanks!

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### Author: ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [November 3, 2003, 1:06pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-check-please/34510/2 "2003-11-03T13:06:11Z")

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simple yet effective, I like it. The only thing that I’d do is make the text _slightly_ larger. Overall good job. I didn’t see the game up yet, is it done? Will it be free? You may want to think about putting information like that up, maybe a FAQ.

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### Author: ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [November 3, 2003, 1:08pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-check-please/34510/3 "2003-11-03T13:08:46Z")

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yea i like it… not to sure about the logo in the top right corner looks abit out of place but other then that it is decent… keep up the good work

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### Author: ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [November 3, 2003, 1:46pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-check-please/34510/4 "2003-11-03T13:46:03Z")

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Nice design, some transitions from section to section would be nice. The artwork looks nice and some the effects applied to the images are good. Good work keep it up.

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### Author: ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [November 3, 2003, 7:35pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-check-please/34510/5 "2003-11-03T19:35:39Z")

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I like it, simple to use and navigate. where did you get the font? the cartoon book look. I’ve been wanting this font for ages.