# Site critique pls!

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique-pls/290434>\
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**Created:** [June 14, 2009, 10:02pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique-pls/290434 "2009-06-14T22:02:59Z")\
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**Author:** ![yachtpicasso](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/y/f08c70/32.png) [@yachtpicasso](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/yachtpicasso)\
**Post date:** [June 14, 2009, 10:02pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique-pls/290434/1 "2009-06-14T22:02:59Z")

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Hey guys… i’m a complete noob at flash design and scripting. what i am ok at is editing. anyways, my cousin asked me to make a website for one of his products, and since he knows im getting into flash, he did me the favour of handing me the job.

so i made this site along with a friend… but its missing something. its missing some life. what would you suggest i add or change?

www.tonalinoil.it

just skip the intro cause im having problems uploading the video file.

thank you for your time!!