# Site critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique/182318>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [March 17, 2006, 3:59am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique/182318 "2006-03-17T03:59:13Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 6\
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**Author:** ![dravalanche](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/8797f3/32.png) [@dravalanche](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/dravalanche)\
**Post date:** [March 17, 2006, 3:59am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique/182318/1 "2006-03-17T03:59:13Z")

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hey I’ve been working on a site for a musician and I’m getting sort of close to finishing it ( just goto add some more content. Anyway I’m looking for critiques off you smart people

[http://www.geocities.com/dravalancheweb/main.html](http://www.geocities.com/dravalancheweb/main.html)

give me your critiques please, don’t hold back.

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**Author:** ![dravalanche](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/8797f3/32.png) [@dravalanche](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/dravalanche)\
**Post date:** [March 21, 2006, 1:59am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique/182318/2 "2006-03-21T01:59:06Z")

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> [@SPAD3S](#):
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> very nice clean style. I like how you did everything but it could be better with  
> smoother scrollong on the scroll bars and, the server your using…  
> geocities sucks unless you pay for no adds. i suggest  
> [www.freewebs.com](http://www.freewebs.com) host ur site there with no adds lots of free space and i think unlim bandidth. but anyways yea you might have all that worked out anyway so, good job.

cheers, We are using a proper host, I’m just using geocities to do the beta trials.

Check out the slightly updated version of the site

[http://geocities.com/dravalancheweb/](http://geocities.com/dravalancheweb/)

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**Author:** ![Pixeladdict](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/c89c15/32.png) [@Pixeladdict](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Pixeladdict)\
**Post date:** [March 21, 2006, 9:05am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique/182318/3 "2006-03-21T09:05:51Z")

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“Contact”

Theres no “go back” button after having sent an email?!

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**Author:** ![Dtads](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/dtads/32/1230_2.png) [@Dtads](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Dtads)\
**Post date:** [March 21, 2006, 9:50am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique/182318/4 "2006-03-21T09:50:06Z")

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Nice, clean and straight to the point… I like it…  
As for the mailing list… quiet simple, althought I am not to keen on the page transition, but thats just been pedantic.:gi:

give the textfield and instance name i.e mailText  
mailText.onSetFocus = function() {  
mailText.text = “”;  
}

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**Author:** ![dravalanche](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/8797f3/32.png) [@dravalanche](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/dravalanche)\
**Post date:** [March 23, 2006, 12:36am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique/182318/5 "2006-03-23T00:36:48Z")

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> [@Pixeladdict](#):
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> “Contact”
> 
> Theres no “go back” button after having sent an email?!

I’m was going to just use the main nav as a way to move back.

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**Author:** ![dravalanche](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/8797f3/32.png) [@dravalanche](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/dravalanche)\
**Post date:** [March 23, 2006, 12:39am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique/182318/6 "2006-03-23T00:39:16Z")

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> [@Dtads](#):
>
> Nice, clean and straight to the point… I like it…  
> As for the mailing list… quiet simple, althought I am not to keen on the page transition, but thats just been pedantic.:gi:
> 
> give the textfield and instance name i.e mailText  
> mailText.onSetFocus = function() {  
> mailText.text = “”;  
> }

cheers man your a life saver. I tried turning it into a movie clip but that created more problems. thanks again