# Site critique

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique/4189
**Category:** design
**Created:** [October 4, 2001, 7:22am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique/4189 "2001-10-04T07:22:58Z")
**Posts on this page:** 3
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### Author: ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [October 4, 2001, 7:22am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique/4189/1 "2001-10-04T07:22:58Z")

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wussup kirupa. it’s been a long time since i’ve visited your site; my interest in flash had waned a lot and i haven’t touched it for a long time. recently, however, i was asked to make a website for my counter-strike clan and, remembering the good comments i always received here on your site, i decided to put it up for critique. so here it is:  
[www.angelfire.com/tv/donk…sting.html](http://www.angelfire.com/tv/donkim/hrt/testing.html)  
i’m basically done with the design of it; most of the work is completed. what i need to do now is add the finishing touches, such as better text-scroll buttons and some sound effects. please give honest critiques; i already put a decent amount of time into this and a few more hours won’t hurt.  
oh, btw, before any of you blast the site for ripping off some others’ sites, you’re right; the basic design of having boxes expand and contract has been used many a times before. so spare me that criticism =0).

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### Author: ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [October 5, 2001, 4:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique/4189/2 "2001-10-05T04:16:41Z")

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I noticed that your CSS tags are showing within the scrolling text. Also, I see no menu bar yet… I asume that it is not up yet however.

PS- we’ll be moving this to the “site check” area in a couple of days. Just so you know where to look for it. Thank you from the mod upuaut

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### Author: ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [October 6, 2001, 2:18pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-critique/4189/3 "2001-10-06T14:18:07Z")

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Hey Don!  
Long time no see. The site looks really cool. It has a nice “relevare” feel to it. I think once the tags in the scrolling are fixed, the site will be pretty cool.

Cheers,  
Kirupa
