# Site review

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-review/272360>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [October 4, 2008, 10:03am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-review/272360 "2008-10-04T10:03:14Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 1\
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**Author:** ![friezens](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/f/f05b48/32.png) [@friezens](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/friezens)\
**Post date:** [October 4, 2008, 10:03am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/site-review/272360/1 "2008-10-04T10:03:14Z")

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hey!

So i made this site for a kids store (its all in portuguese but theres really not much text to read, and the main focus isnt the text at all) and I was wondering what you guys think about it.

Dont hold back, tell me everything that is wrong.

The site is at [http://umquartodesonho.com/testes/Novo.html](http://umquartodesonho.com/testes/Novo.html)

Thank you!