# Sitecritique - good or bad?
**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sitecritique-good-or-bad/116116
**Category:** Uncategorized
**Created:** [July 14, 2004, 6:56pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sitecritique-good-or-bad/116116 "2004-07-14T18:56:45Z")
**Posts on this page:** 3
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### Author:  [@dermcsqueeb](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/dermcsqueeb)
#### Post date: [July 14, 2004, 6:56pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sitecritique-good-or-bad/116116/1 "2004-07-14T18:56:45Z")
Hi everybody 🙂
What do you think abou my site- its gonna be my portfolio site. Its my first flash site. The preloader isnt finished and the content of the portfolio site has to be inserted.
Im not sure about the dark style of the page.
Some tips? thx
[http://www.mcsqueeb.com/flash.htm](http://www.mcsqueeb.com/flash.htm)
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 10:26am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sitecritique-good-or-bad/116116/2 "2004-07-21T10:26:09Z")
I’ve finished the site now- everything should be done now- thanks for the tips
How do you like it now?
[http://www.mcsqueeb.com](http://www.mcsqueeb.com)
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 1:21pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sitecritique-good-or-bad/116116/3 "2004-07-21T13:21:38Z")
Looks good. Funny thing is that I had a splash screen published about 7 months ago that looked exactly like this layout. So, obviously I like it.
The only thing I didn’t like is the stars in your portfolio, I know that you want it to flow w/ your site but they seem way to overbearing. Good job colors look real nice together, and everything seems to work well, interesting transitions as well.