# Splash Page Critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/110959>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [May 21, 2004, 1:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/110959 "2004-05-21T13:00:03Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 3\
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**Author:** ![paddy1](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/e36b37/32.png) [@paddy1](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/paddy1)\
**Post date:** [May 21, 2004, 1:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/110959/1 "2004-05-21T13:00:03Z")

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This is a splash page I made for Urban Echo Design using photoshop. I’m going to put the interactivity in later using fireworks. Tell me what you think.

![](http://img62.photobucket.com/albums/v188/Fla5h/Splash.jpg)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [May 24, 2004, 10:30pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/110959/2 "2004-05-24T22:30:41Z")

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I like it but make it just a tad smaller, it’s a little overwhelming. I would keep the second paragraph. Good use of colors. keep it up.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [May 25, 2004, 12:21am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/110959/3 "2004-05-25T00:21:05Z")

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skinda hard to read the text on your uploaded page… and your flash player hotspot needs to move west a bit but i just nit picking now! lol (sonly coz its a great site an ur younger than me! 😛 )

Prophet.