# Splash page critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/52881>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [May 28, 2004, 9:15am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/52881 "2004-05-28T09:15:01Z")\
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**Author:** ![d100763](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/71c47a/32.png) [@d100763](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/d100763)\
**Post date:** [May 28, 2004, 9:15am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/52881/1 "2004-05-28T09:15:01Z")

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I am looking for critique on the[color=Red]

[color=Blue][splash page to intro](http://www2.hawaii.edu/%7Edjacso)[/color][/color][color=Blue].[/color]

There are no buttons hooked up yet…Looking for feedback mainly on color scheme, lettering to see if I am heading in the right direction.  
I want a page with clean looks, nothing to fancy, it’s my first attempt and I am horrible at actionscript.

Question: How can I make my page (with the picture and stats) to be **without windows, toolbars and address bars? I am using dreamweaver** and flash mx. Any help would be appreciated.

PS: Blurry to sharp idea is from [Actionscipt.org](http://Actionscipt.org) by Pat Mineault to give credit…[.click here for tut](http://www.actionscript.org/tutorials/beginner/Blur_transition_effect/index.shtml).