# Splash page critique?

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/58610>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [July 24, 2004, 12:38am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/58610 "2004-07-24T00:38:35Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 5\
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**Author:** ![worm](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/worm/32/235_2.png) [@worm](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/worm)\
**Post date:** [July 24, 2004, 12:38am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/58610/1 "2004-07-24T00:38:35Z")

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This should be my splash page, what do you guys think?  
[http://www.geocities.com/wormybart/emptyness/](http://www.geocities.com/wormybart/emptyness/)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 24, 2004, 12:45am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/58610/2 "2004-07-24T00:45:21Z")

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Does it have to be black and white? And that font is terrible. Once again I am forced to link to [www.dafont.com](http://www.dafont.com). Loads of free fonts. Check it out. Also for the splash page of a site called emptyness it looks a bit ‘full’. I reccomend opening Photoshop (if you have it) and rendering some clouds and playing with filters to get a cool ‘empty’ background. Then use one of your great new dafont fonts for the text.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 24, 2004, 1:09am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/58610/3 "2004-07-24T01:09:06Z")

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I agree, you could use colors, at least some gray…  
You should change the font, and try to keep it simple.  
I liked the ideea with squares… Keep on working!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 24, 2004, 1:13am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/58610/4 "2004-07-24T01:13:47Z")

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yes i agree with flash gordon lit bit more work and u will get there.

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[http://speed.vbsimplified.com](http://speed.vbsimplified.com)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 24, 2004, 4:42pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/splash-page-critique/58610/5 "2004-07-24T16:42:21Z")

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smaller is better, make your lines thinner, and more elegant. change the background color to black to it “blends in”. And lastly center it. Other than that, it looks like a good start!

Keep it up!  
3dnirvana