# Style/Color Mockup C&C please!

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [September 14, 2004, 3:56pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254 "2004-09-14T15:56:15Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 14\
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**Author:** ![Ryall](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/53a042/32.png) [@Ryall](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Ryall)\
**Post date:** [September 14, 2004, 3:56pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254/1 "2004-09-14T15:56:15Z")

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Hey guys… Im doing a site to promote some beach properties (condos) on the Island of Cozumel Mexico (South East of Cancun). So obviously I want to have a tropical, kinda relaxed feel, but without anything cheezy. The sunsets there are amazing so I am trying to use a similar color palatte. Also yellow can be a bit much so I am going to try and incorporate some texture to tone it down. Over all I am looking for warm inviting colors a casual yet luxury feel.

Here is my first of what will be many mockups… this small piece uses the colors textures and styles that would be utilized throughout the site (if I choose to use this one).

Please throw some C&C my way:

![](http://www.grafikdesigns.com/mock.jpg)

![](http://www.grafikdesigns.com/mocktxt.jpg)

Peace

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**Post date:** [September 14, 2004, 4:47pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254/2 "2004-09-14T16:47:14Z")

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well i like it so far, good start…not much to crit.

the yellow was a bit hard on my eyes, tone it down a bit i think…

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**Post date:** [September 14, 2004, 5:56pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254/3 "2004-09-14T17:56:05Z")

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I think it’s a way oversaturated with yellow.

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**Post date:** [September 14, 2004, 6:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254/4 "2004-09-14T18:00:57Z")

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I like it. The way the image works with the yellow is nice. I wouldn’t mind seeing it with a darker background color. Perhaps orangish?

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**Post date:** [September 14, 2004, 6:13pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254/5 "2004-09-14T18:13:08Z")

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MY EYES! Too much yellow down the center. ☹

Other than that, awesome. :thumb:

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**Post date:** [September 14, 2004, 6:21pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254/6 "2004-09-14T18:21:55Z")

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it looks pretty good but as the others said, too much yellow, it hurts the eyes

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**Post date:** [September 14, 2004, 6:48pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254/7 "2004-09-14T18:48:22Z")

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yellow is too bright - and that gray text is washing out

have to see the colors adjusted before anything else could be said.

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**Post date:** [September 15, 2004, 12:07am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254/8 "2004-09-15T00:07:34Z")

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WHAT!!! That yellow is off the hook!

Actually… although it’s bright… it’s not bad at all. Basically when ppl see things they’ve never seen B4 they always think it won’t work. But really it depends on concept you’re tryin to work on. But the Cozmuel text… bad choice of a font.

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**Post date:** [September 15, 2004, 4:26am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254/9 "2004-09-15T04:26:12Z")

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Thanks for the C&C so far, I really appreciate it!

Simplistik: I am still in limbo on the text… sometimes it works for and others I think it is horrible - so obviously it isnt right. Im looking into it.

As far as the yellow, I really want it to be a main theme color of the site, but I am looking into some blue backgrounds, kinda giving the look of sun over blue ocean…

I dunno, I’ve got some ideas, and Ill post when their done. Again thanks for eveything you have all said so far. Please keep it coming when I post next, youre all a great help!

Peace

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**Post date:** [September 15, 2004, 4:33am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254/10 "2004-09-15T04:33:53Z")

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I’m not feelin’ the yellow at all. I like the background texture but I’d like it to be more like a sandy coloured canvas. If it were me I’d go with blues, whites, sandy colours with some small red accents on things like beach chairs and umbrellas.

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**Post date:** [September 15, 2004, 1:23pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254/11 "2004-09-15T13:23:36Z")

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Here it is with a tan and a blue background… Im diggin the tan (Thanks CG!)

As for the font selection, Im still working on that…

![](http://www.grafikdesigns.com/mockBlue.jpg)

![](http://www.grafikdesigns.com/mockTan.jpg)

Ryall

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**Post date:** [September 15, 2004, 1:30pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254/12 "2004-09-15T13:30:21Z")

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I definitely like tha other colors better, it gives more contrast to the image and draws your eyes to what you want to be seeing.

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**Post date:** [September 15, 2004, 1:46pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254/13 "2004-09-15T13:46:26Z")

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tan looks good…

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**Post date:** [September 15, 2004, 9:46pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/style-color-mockup-c-c-please/64254/14 "2004-09-15T21:46:45Z")

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Yea I like the tan too. It might be cool if you added some stitching or maybe some frayed edges to the canvas.

I’m also curious to know what it would look like with some different colours besides the yellow. It looks like such a fun project.
