# Sup ppl? Crit Pls

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sup-ppl-crit-pls/72649>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [December 8, 2004, 12:30am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sup-ppl-crit-pls/72649 "2004-12-08T00:30:52Z")\
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**Author:** ![Desire](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/f475e1/32.png) [@Desire](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Desire)\
**Post date:** [December 8, 2004, 12:30am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/sup-ppl-crit-pls/72649/1 "2004-12-08T00:30:52Z")

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[\_ONE](http://homepage.ntlworld.com/s.rate/Love.jpg)

[\_TWO](http://homepage.ntlworld.com/s.rate/MyBody.jpg)

Just two pieces ive been workin on all day. Would apreciate some constructive crit if you dont mind 🙂