# The.driven \[working\] **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [January 7, 2003, 12:39am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/the-driven-working/10761 "2003-01-07T00:39:27Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 12\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Legoman](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/l/edb3f5/32.png) [@Legoman](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Legoman)\ **Post date:** [January 7, 2003, 12:39am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/the-driven-working/10761/1 "2003-01-07T00:39:27Z")
Hey ppl, I submitted this before, but the javascript launch wasn’t working for most, this should be fixed now plus more complete in general. I am very grateful for any feedback, but I already know that I need to get an ad-free server, just getting the cash together. Thanks, link: [the.driven](http://www.ripcord.s5.com/thedriven/drivenlaunch.html) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 7, 2003, 12:59am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/the-driven-working/10761/2 "2003-01-07T00:59:42Z")
I think you have a very conceptual layout here and it has potential, but as for professionalism and a clean look, I think it could use a lil more work. First off, I don’t know what you have a layout in a pop-up window, pop ups makes your site less attractive so you might want to have it just regular or atleast give the user the option of having it pop-up or regular. Your navigation is really cool with the sliding thingy, but the text on it is a bit bg for my taste I also noticed you used a serif style font for your content which doesn’t go well with your layout, I think a san serif stylie font like arial or verdana would be more suitable and maybe reduce the size don’t a notch or two would look better too. That ball that could be tossed around is a nice touch, it adds a bit of interactivity to your layout so that’s cool, but I don’t like the red ring around it, I think it would look better with out it. And last, I think you should add in some transitional effects between the sections so when a user clicks on something it will be a smoother transition instead of just jumping back and forth. Good luck and I hope you’ll post your work again. =) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 7, 2003, 1:26am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/the-driven-working/10761/3 "2003-01-07T01:26:52Z")
i like the effects, good job. and you should change the font from times new roman to something else- -Happy Flashin’:cowboy: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 7, 2003, 3:51am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/the-driven-working/10761/4 "2003-01-07T03:51:14Z")
Thanks for your input guys. eGeek:{think I should take note since you just won SOTW congrats} I’ll take all your comments under consideration(and probably use them all) and maybe post back once I’ve improved things a little. Thanks again. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 7, 2003, 1:12pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/the-driven-working/10761/5 "2003-01-07T13:12:13Z")
I like the background very much, it’s well done, but I don’t like that ball thinggy. I don’t think it brings much to the site :-\ Also, as EG said, you should work a bit on the way you present your texts. pom \<:} ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 7, 2003, 1:15pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/the-driven-working/10761/6 "2003-01-07T13:15:53Z")
I got about 4 - 5 pop up windows when I opened it up, so if there’s any way you can get rid of those… It’s not your fault - I know adverts are a problem on some places like geocities etc… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 7, 2003, 2:36pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/the-driven-working/10761/7 "2003-01-07T14:36:40Z")
the link appears broken to me :-\ ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 7, 2003, 5:57pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/the-driven-working/10761/8 "2003-01-07T17:57:19Z")
Not bad. Liked the menu but hated the text used and make it smaller. The ball thing was neat but it got in the way of the scroll bar when i tried to click it. I would maybe thing about a differnt background as well. Popup window bad…Embeded HTML page good. All and all a nice start. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 8, 2003, 12:34am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/the-driven-working/10761/9 "2003-01-08T00:34:23Z")
Thanks for the tips all. sintax: the reason it’s not embedded in an html page just now is so that I don’t have a banner ad. across the top, they can’t put it on the swf…not ideal I know but… split opinion on the ball though, maybe if I can incorporate it into the page transitions it can serve some kind of purpose as well as being a pointless toy. once again thanks for your time. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 8, 2003, 3:17pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/the-driven-working/10761/10 "2003-01-08T15:17:52Z")
Ya that would be cool. You could also put an on/off butto nfor the ball some where. If some one gets sick of it or it gets i nthe way they can just turn it off. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 8, 2003, 5:35pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/the-driven-working/10761/11 "2003-01-08T17:35:22Z")
Great idea, an on/off hadn’t even occurred to me. I think I might be an idiot. thanks Sintax. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 8, 2003, 5:36pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/the-driven-working/10761/12 "2003-01-08T17:36:21Z")
Hey thats what I’m here for(-: got to come up with a good idea once in a while